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Ghalti
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| Description | Ghalti by Sadaf Ali is a Social Reformal Story about Mistakes we make that Destroy ours and others Lives and lead us all to many terrible and some times irreversible situations. The story carries a serious message that actions must be taken with reponsiblity and care. Sadaf Ali is a new writer and this is her first story. Please comment on this story and let her know how far she succeeded in putting her ideas and thoughts in the form of written words of a story |
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| Submission Date | 03:24:2010 (Edited ) |
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achi niyat se kiya gaya galat kaam kabi acha nai ho sakta..
good lesson in a good way.
Posted 03:25:2010 - 12:35:41:
nice ....... rahib pe bht tars aaya hai
os ko os ki kistake ki bht bari saza mli/frst mistake of mashal and the 2 nd was zohaib....osey sb pata tha phir b os mnaimashal se shadi ki..yei shadi wo rahib ki karwa deta.sb thek h jata.mashal nai b rahi k sath zearti k,i
sadaf bht nice likha ap nai
Posted 03:25:2010 - 12:27:37:
sadaf no doubtits a nice story ... mistakes ki starting mashal se hoi..jab zohaib nai osey kabi chaha hi nai to osey rahib ko mayos nai karna chaey tha..zohaib ki bhabhi ban k rehna osey tab mushkil lagta jab k zohaib nai osey response diya hota .on k darmean hota kuch.one side love mai kiya osey zohaib ko batana hi nai chaey tha.larkio ko compromising hona chaey...or realy realy mje rahib pe bht tarz aaya..
osey to puar karney ki saza mli. true love tha os ka ..phley rejection ka dukh phir phir osi larkika os ki bhabhi banna wo b jab k sb ko pata tha even zohaib ko ..and phir os ki beti ka paida hona to much hearing .bht dukh hoa.phir os ki death phir mashal ki phir zohaib.
osey bhtr bari saza mli.....
any how
bht nice sharing thi.....
Nice Story hai, Islahi hai un nojawano k liye jo jazbat main aa kur qadam utatey hain. start main to Rohub aur Zohub he samaj nahin aya. k kaun kiya hai, but Achi koshih thi.
Sadaf Ali Best of Luck.
Very impressive attempt.....!!! sadaf mujhe aapka novel bohat zyada pasand aaya hai, please app aisay novels likhti rahen. "Ghalti" ko parh k aisa bilkul nahi laga, k ye aapki pehli koshish hai.
SYDA GI BANDA HAATH HOULA RAKH LETA HAI.It`s a story that can change the heart of everyone.Some sentences really a pearls for everyone.