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Ghalti
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| Description | Ghalti by Sadaf Ali is a Social Reformal Story about Mistakes we make that Destroy ours and others Lives and lead us all to many terrible and some times irreversible situations. The story carries a serious message that actions must be taken with reponsiblity and care. Sadaf Ali is a new writer and this is her first story. Please comment on this story and let her know how far she succeeded in putting her ideas and thoughts in the form of written words of a story |
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| Submission Date | 03:24:2010 (Edited ) |
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I have never read this kind of heart touching & social reforming story... This is my personal opinion it should be printed in other languages also because its very sensitive story so other poeple will be unlucky if they dont read in their language. I hope Sadaf Ali should keep writing in other serious issues because indeed she have keen observation to describe comlicated issues in simple way. Wish you all the best.
rohaib na bhot ghalti ke ager woh apny bhi ko pahely he bata daita tu is qadar tension naa hoti
likn osy inkaar karny ka dar tha
story main her actor apni ghaga theek tha...
akair main ek baat karna chata hon ka jo baat be ap k dil main ho tu bata daini chaiya
aaisa naa ho k baad mian ap ko kash kana parhy
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Posted 03:26:2010 - 22:13:10:
kafi childish story hai. haqeeqat say bohat door. saray ghar walay hi mar diey ishq ki waja say. ishq tha ya suicide attack? ainda thora sensible likhain
well you made me laugh......but this is her first story, and she did cover all aspect of it ...so give her little credit......have you ever read the story and later thought" what happen to that person" or what was that about ........at least she killed every body ...
Posted 03:26:2010 - 09:11:21:
A very heart touching story..hats off 2 Sadaf.......Keep writing the good stuff
بہت اچھی تحریر ھے صدف آپ کی،اچھے پیغام اور سبق کے ساتھ۔۔۔آپ کی تحریر میں پختگی اور بےساختگی ھے،میں نے بہت انجوائے کیا۔۔
ایسی ہی تحریروں کا آپ کی طرف سے انتظار رہےکا۔۔امید ہے مستقبل میں آپ ایسی ہی شاندار پیغام اور اسباق سے بھرپور کہانیوں سے لطف اندوز ھونے کا موقع دیںگی۔۔۔اللہ تعالی آپ کے زورقلم کومضبوطی دے(آمین(
kafi childish story hai. haqeeqat say bohat door. saray ghar walay hi mar diey ishq ki waja say. ishq tha ya suicide attack? ainda thora sensible likhain
i like this story toooo much...such a good lesson
keep it up....
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Posted 03:25:2010 - 17:54:48:
Sadaf....
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Posted 03:25:2010 - 17:52:09:
SYDA GI BANDA HAATH HOULA RAKH LETA HAI.It`s a story that can change the heart of everyone.Some sentences really a pearls for everyone.
I really like you expression "tora hat Hola hi rakhna tha"
Posted 03:25:2010 - 16:24:15:
Its a nice story anf touched my heart. kabhi kabhi hum waqai aise galtiyan kar daite hai jis pa hume bht baad mai pachtawa hota hai. Good Lesson for us.
Thanx Sadaf