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Ghalti
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| Description | Ghalti by Sadaf Ali is a Social Reformal Story about Mistakes we make that Destroy ours and others Lives and lead us all to many terrible and some times irreversible situations. The story carries a serious message that actions must be taken with reponsiblity and care. Sadaf Ali is a new writer and this is her first story. Please comment on this story and let her know how far she succeeded in putting her ideas and thoughts in the form of written words of a story |
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| Submission Date | 03:24:2010 (Edited ) |
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Comments on Ghalti
its a nice story mujhay bohatpasan aya ap ka novel keep it up
and ap nay bohat acha point bataya k baz galtiya aisi hoti hay jinhay ap cha k b thek nahe kar saktay
A good start.Nodoubt it's a reformal,tragic story having a memorable lesson.')">
after reading this novel i felt that every charecter of this novel was born to compensate the mistake made by rohib. kia shifal or zohib ki koi or life nahi thhe kia ALLAH ne un ko bheeja hi is lie tha ke rohib ki ghalati ka khamiaza bhughte. it was a good topic but kuch or end hona chahiye tha. sadaf u have good writting skills but do justify the characters.
Posted 05:30:2010 - 19:36:26:
its a gr8 story...GOD BLESS U i hope u will improve ur skills soon..
main do teen din se ye navel parha hon wese main navel parhta nahi hon lakin mujhe app ka ye navel buhat acha laga app ko our mehnat karne chaiye keep it up sadaf.
as a first attempt it was good, but Sadaf!! please keep in mind for the future, never choose names with this kind of resemblance, like these two could be differentiated only by a dot. it makes the story really complicated for the reader and causes interest loss.
no doubt, the story and the concept was very good. keep it up. keep writing as I hope more good books from your pen.
Well done Sadaf, Its a good start (as a writer) but you need to work more on it. I hope you will get better as time will go. All the best
Posted 05:21:2010 - 09:26:55:
Apny jo bhi koshish ki ha Novel likhny ki wo Novel ki category ma ata hi nahi ha. Or khasosan Social Romantic Reformal Novels ki category. Ap na novel ma kisi bhi kirdar ko justify kia hi nahi ha. Pata nahi ap is ma kia social topic point out karna cha rahy thin. Or agar thora bohat kia to us ko Justify nahi kia. Please ap say guzarish ha ka ap phly Novel likhny ka RULES ko samjhain or phir try karain. Aap na sirf Novel ma saza hi saza di ha or wo bhi 1 insan dosry ko day raha ha ya phir Kud ko. Is ma Allaha sa related koi concept ha hi nahi jo reader ko thora sa bhi hopeful kary ka agar hamary society ma burai ha to us ko sudharny k liay Allaha ha or kuch log asay bhi hain jo dosron ki galti ko sodhar sakty hian.
GUEST na jo bhi comment pass kia ha wo bhi theak hi kaha ha.
i am totally speechless about this story
amazing and heart touching.
i don't know who is the writer but really its too good.
MAY ALLAH BLESS THE WRITER AND PUBLISHER FOR SUCH A LISTENABLE STORY.
AND AT LAST SO SAD FOR ROHAIB.
min ne khani parhi jo k mujh ko bhot piari lagi hae allha ap ko aur hmmat ata kare moasrey k msail ko ujagar karny ki aur ap ki slahiytoon min aur nikhar pida kary (ameen)
dua go qazi majid ali