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Ghalti
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| Description | Ghalti by Sadaf Ali is a Social Reformal Story about Mistakes we make that Destroy ours and others Lives and lead us all to many terrible and some times irreversible situations. The story carries a serious message that actions must be taken with reponsiblity and care. Sadaf Ali is a new writer and this is her first story. Please comment on this story and let her know how far she succeeded in putting her ideas and thoughts in the form of written words of a story |
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| Submission Date | 03:24:2010 (Edited ) |
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Brilliant novel,it's hard to believe that this is writers 1st novel because it's writen so beautifully........people who believe that every thing is fair in love and war, do not think about the consequences of their action because u cant get wat u wnt in life if its not in ur kismat no matter wat u do.........
Gud look Sadaf
Really very emotional and touching story,which makes me cry.really like it.
It was a spectacular story,really difficult to distinguish whether it was writers first effort or not!
Though i'm consistent with the justification of punishments given towards the characters,but i must say it was really bad consequence with shefol,dis character shouldn't have suffered to dis extent..
Over all nyxx effort..
Wish u all da best!
Maryam
Posted 01:15:2011 - 07:47:41:
it is difficult to believe that this is writer's first effort.it is definetely one of the touching and beautiful stories I have ever read in my life. I think I can never forget it. it seemed to be just normal at the start, but at the end it surely makes the readers feel that it was not a common story. so beautiful.
salam to all bohot ache kahani thi our parh kar bohot acha laga agey bhi achy novel likhty rahiya ga plzz
jab sab kuch pta tha shadi se pehle to later itna attitude kyn by zohaib? shafal ke character ke sath atleast i think zyada justify nahin ho ska. start mai her character was very lively very refreshing, but her end was very tragic.
Posted 08:08:2010 - 04:08:56:
Such a lovely story i have never red such a lovely story throughout my life.
Realyyyyyyy fantastic but with the tragic ending.
nice story
2 batain kahun gy
1 ye k jang oar mohabbt main sab jaiz naheen hota insaniat se girna to bilkul b naheen
2nd ye k jo b rishta ho ap se jurne se pahle jis b halat main ho, jab wo apki zindagy main ay to us se mujhlis ho jain, q k tab wo apke liye hota hay,
beshak story main hope naheen magr phir b ye haqeekat k bht kareeb hay
sadaf thora oar explain kar k likhty to ziada acha hota
overall achi koshish hay
best of luck for next one