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Tayagi
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| Description | Tayagi aik aisi achhuti or munfarid dastan hay, jisay qaereen paRhtay hoe uski dilchaspioN or ranginioN mein kho jaienge. UmangoN, ArzooN or jazboN se bharay hoe aik nojawan ki dastan, dunia ne uske saath bohot zi zayadatian kien, in rawaioN se tang aa ker, usne apni zindagi khatam karne ka faisla ker lia, lekin qudrat ke khel niralay hotay hain. Abhi uski zindagi mein bohot se aise waqieat pesh anay thay jo dilchasp bhi thay or anokhay bhi. Aik pur israr or an dekhi quwwat uske sath shamil ho gaie. Uska kahna tha keh woh uske lie takhleeq ki gaie hay or isay uske lie zinda rahna hoga. Is anokhi or pur israr quwwat ne uski zindagi ka rukh yaksar tabdeel ker dia. Uski zindagi herat angaiz waqeat se pur ho gaie. Woh bhi is quwwat ko chahnay laga, jisne uski zindagi ka dhara tabdeel ker dia tha. Zindagi se farar hasil kerne walay is nojawan ki dastan-e-herat, jiski zindagi ki zaamin aik pur israr quwwat ban gaie thi. |
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| Submission Date | 06:17:2007 |
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Comments on Tayagi
We should appreciate a writer because what he thinks which he presents in his novel.We, the reader have different thinking which may did not match with the writer. Although Mr. Hashmi has tried to his best and we should thank him.
d.hossain
Dear Mr. Hashmi,
The novel started with a good tempo. The base of the story was fine. The inclusion of "Rooh" in the story added to the flavour. But I am sorry to say that after weaving a good story you finished the novel in a very strange way. I am really disappointed with the finishing tone of the story. However I liked the story but i didnt like the end. Then there was a lost of "masala" sex, voilation etc which at times got unnecesserily boring. It is right to add "masala" in the story but at the same time you should consider that your book may go to the hands of different age people. However keep it up & in my opinion rewrite this novel with ammendments & a better ending.
Regards
i have views this novel..
nut i thick it-s not bad
good story..
bye
yeh bilkul aik fazool novel hai. novel ka writer yeh nahi janta kay Hindu Mazhab main cousion ko sister ki tarha samjha jata hai. jab is novel main parkash novel kay hero say kehta hai k jo larki wo sath lay kar aya hai wo ous cousion hai
Intahai Bakwaas...is say ziada bakwaas aaj tak na daikhaa na sunaa na parha aur umeed hai na hi aisa koi future main hoo ga..main nay 2 din ka loss kar diya iss novell kay peechay...
yeh aik achi urdu web site hai jisay her koi per sakta hai main ap logon ko aik aur achi aur informative urdu web site batata hoon yeh bhi ap logon ko bohat passand aye gi.
A very nice story for "Pakistani Punjabi Film".
To be very honest , nihayat hi fazool novel hai , Na is ki story main kuch khaas tha aur na hi is ki theme koi itni achi thi aur ending to just like Punjabi Fils, Kushton kay pushtay laga diyay hero nay 5 pages main hi ,
Any ways ajeeb sa hi novel tha
MAIN NE YE NAVOL PERHA TO BAHUT HI AJEEB NAVOL HAI.IS MAIN "SEX,SEX AUR SEX HAI.YEH KIA BAAT HOI HAR BAR PER SEX.
PLZ KOI NAVOL HUM IS LIAY PERTAY HAIN K HUM IS SE KOI SABAQ HASIL KARAIN.LAKIN YE NAVOL TO BAS!
PLZ!IS KI JAGA KOI ACHA NAVOL RAKHAIN.
OK!
OK&BAY
It is an interesting novel. Full of Advanture,Romance & Suspence. But the end is very much ordinary & boring