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Apradhi (Sinner)
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| Description | <br>Apradhi (Culprit) is Suspense Thriller Spine Chilling Horror Novel by Razzaq Shahid Kohler. Its a fiction story but based on the fact of battle between Black Magic, Evil Powers from Darkside and the good souls of brave men and jinns (genie). Mr. Razzaq Shahid did a good research work on the invisible shape shifter fiery creatures (dJinns) before writing this story. He also added very valuable information about the jinns in the begining of the novel (after foreword from page 3 to 7). Those readers who want to know about the reallity of Jinns and how they affect human's life, should read this book. The main goal of this story is to explain things about these invisible creatures who are bad and some nice as well. We hope, our readers interested in Horror Thriller Stories, Clash of Kala Jadu Sifli Amal and Noori Ilm stories, will like this novel |
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| Tags | blackmagic, horror, thriller |
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| Submission Date | 05:30:2010 |
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Bahut hi khoobsurat andaaz mein aur haqaeque ko madd-e-nazar mein rakhte huye kufr aur shirk ki ladayee ko pesh kiya gaya hai is silsile mein mosannif ki jitni bhi taareef ki jaye kam hai........
محترم رياض شاہد کوہلر سے يہ خادم واقف ہے۔ موصوف ايک مشہور ڈائجسٹ ميں چھپنے کے ليے بہت بري طرح بے چين تھے مگر تحرير کاناپختہ پن اور پلاٹ کي کمزوري کے باعث کبھي انہيں لفٹ نہيں کرائي گئي۔ يہي وجہ ان کا ناول اپرادھي پڑھنے کا سبب بن گئي۔ اور۔۔۔۔۔۔ مجھے خوشي ہوئي کہ ناول پڑھنےميں لگا ميراوقت حسب توقع برباد گيا۔ سب رنگ کي انکا،عمران ڈائجسٹ کي مہاراني،سسپنس کي سوناگھاٹ کا پجاري اوراسي ٹائپ کي کہانيوں کا بھونڈا چربہ ۔۔۔۔۔ جس کا نام ہے اپرادھي۔۔۔۔ کمزور پلاٹ کے ساتھ اردو قواعد انشا اور املا کي غلطيوں سے پر يہ ناول شايد بچوں کو بھي پسند نہ آسکے۔۔۔ باذوق اور سنجيدہ قارئين کي توبات ہي کياہے۔
Itni Khaas nahi thi... mei expect kr raha tha k QURAN k reference k hawaley se kuch buht khas padhney ko milega JINNAT k baarey mei... magar buht mayusi hoi...
Posted 06:20:2010 - 22:00:51:
but it is a very bakwas story.
the writer must be write stories for childern.
Posted 06:14:2010 - 06:17:21:
gud but not v vel
Posted 06:07:2010 - 17:24:56:
Not impresses at all. I am sorry but will agree with Rizwana, it was a joke. Every other page was about "relationships", didn't like it. Can not really find the theme behind this story.
writer ko abhi aur prectice ki zarorat hai fuzoole story aap kitabghar wale mazher kaleem ki imran series ko bhoole hi gaye pls iss per bhi nazer-karam karyee anxiusly waiting for those books NOT book ok ah{semicolon}){semicolon})
Posted 06:04:2010 - 01:52:47:
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This story was very long Jock and at the end I didn’t even laugh ………………….
It was a gud story but as stated in the start that it is created from the references from QURAN and AHADEES was not found. They were just in the starting page.