Bhaid (Secret) is very long Action Adventure Novel with Suspense and Mystry, written by M.A Rahat who has thousands of stories on his credit in the long writing career of past 30 years and published by Ilm o Irfan Publishers Lahore. MA Rahat is equally popular for his horror thriller fiction stories as well as sensitive social issues. The story of Bhaid Novel is about a group of individuals who founded a expedition team to unfold many super natural mystries and explore the new lands and places unknown to modern world and solve many riddles, mazes and secrets. Read this epic adventure novel and be a part of the expedition team and hunt treasures, explore some tombs and caves, discover new worlds. We hope, kitaabghar.com Action Adventure Mystry Novel Readers will like this novel.
First 3 parts tak tu novel thek tha, lekin phir M. A. Rahat Sb par pata nahi kia janoon sawar hoa k woh apni hi likhi khani ko bhool gaye aur bohat si dosri khayanian idhar udhar se jama kar k is main daal di jin ka na koi sir na pair. Itne famous writer se yeh umeed nahi thi. Agar aisa hi karna tha tu behtar hota k ya tu yeh novel hi na likhte aur agar likhna shoro kar hi dia tha tu 3 parts main khatam kar dete. Bohat hi mayoos kia hai ap ne M. A. Rahat Sb, bohat hi ziyada, is se acha tu banda bachon ki umro-ayyar ki kahani parh le jo kam az kam samajh tu aa jaye gi. Wah Sb wah bohat hi ghattia qism ka mazaq kia hai aap ne hamare saath... will never forget this. Aap ka ek bharam tha woh ek dam se khatam ho gaya hai.
It is so simple to criticize but I would admit it is a good effort. The beginning is great but to be honest the story was prolonged unnecessarily which could have been ended in three or four parts at the maximum. Alaisha chapters were left unfinished which felt like a waste of time, also there was no anti climax and when the story reached climax the ending was so abrupt that I couldn't believe that this was the end. It would have been a quality piece of work as the main theme was excellent but irrelevant details really spoiled the spontaneous theme of the story. Specifically, it was not understandable why the unfinished story of Alaisha was included in it? Any one who has read six parts must admit that they found it of some interest that is why they read all parts, if you don't admit it then you are unjust to the writer. The good and bad aspects are always there and we should consider both, so if you are commenting then please be honest and be true. Thanks
it a good way of time waste. am finish this story with in only 2 days and after read am feel is is the big joke of this century. no story not dialogues nor end climax.
The first two parts of the noval were truly fantastic but in the later parts the story of harmeet sing, Ilaisha etc was truly overwheming but that was not related to this story therefore, MA Rahat could creat that a new story. However I didn't understand that why he contributed that part to this story. M.A Rahat tumhain isko 3 parts mein khatam karna chahiay tha.
mere dil kerta hay k itna kuch comments keron k mera time jo waste hova uss ka kuch azala ho jae, kuch doston ne kaha bhi isay mat parhna, buss adat se majbor mukamal parh k chora, ab khud ko kos raha hon koi aur tamiri kaam ker leta iss time men, M A Rahat tu changa nai kita tenu Allah poche
Allah app ko itni saza de jitna aap ne ye berabt kism ka novel likh ker hamara time waste kia Galian dene ko jee chah raha hai, aur aap ki ghatiya tareen tasnif ne hamesha k leay aap ko meri nazar mein black list ker dia
aslamo alekum, bahut c books study ke he mgr is book main jo bat hai kisi main ni sb se importent writer ka zehn kitna saaf hai us ke soch zahir hoti hai is book main
janab rahat sb. agar novel likhna naheen aata to kun itnee takleef kee ittna bakwaas hay yeh koi sir pair naheen hay kiss bhad khole rahay hain koi aik khani be puri nahee lamba itna kar dea keh akhar main us ko 10 pages main khatam kar dea sab bakwass hay
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Comments on Bhaid (The Secret)
First 3 parts tak tu novel thek tha, lekin phir M. A. Rahat Sb par pata nahi kia janoon sawar hoa k woh apni hi likhi khani ko bhool gaye aur bohat si dosri khayanian idhar udhar se jama kar k is main daal di jin ka na koi sir na pair. Itne famous writer se yeh umeed nahi thi. Agar aisa hi karna tha tu behtar hota k ya tu yeh novel hi na likhte aur agar likhna shoro kar hi dia tha tu 3 parts main khatam kar dete. Bohat hi mayoos kia hai ap ne M. A. Rahat Sb, bohat hi ziyada, is se acha tu banda bachon ki umro-ayyar ki kahani parh le jo kam az kam samajh tu aa jaye gi. Wah Sb wah bohat hi ghattia qism ka mazaq kia hai aap ne hamare saath... will never forget this. Aap ka ek bharam tha woh ek dam se khatam ho gaya hai.
Posted 01:02:2012 - 08:09:05:
It is so simple to criticize but I would admit it is a good effort. The beginning is great but to be honest the story was prolonged unnecessarily which could have been ended in three or four parts at the maximum. Alaisha chapters were left unfinished which felt like a waste of time, also there was no anti climax and when the story reached climax the ending was so abrupt that I couldn't believe that this was the end. It would have been a quality piece of work as the main theme was excellent but irrelevant details really spoiled the spontaneous theme of the story. Specifically, it was not understandable why the unfinished story of Alaisha was included in it?
Any one who has read six parts must admit that they found it of some interest that is why they read all parts, if you don't admit it then you are unjust to the writer. The good and bad aspects are always there and we should consider both, so if you are commenting then please be honest and be true.
Thanks
it a good way of time waste. am finish this story with in only 2 days and after read am feel is is the big joke of this century.
no story not dialogues nor end climax.
The first two parts of the noval were truly fantastic but in the later parts the story of harmeet sing, Ilaisha etc was truly overwheming but that was not related to this story therefore, MA Rahat could creat that a new story. However I didn't understand that why he contributed that part to this story. M.A Rahat tumhain isko 3 parts mein khatam karna chahiay tha.
mere dil kerta hay k itna kuch comments keron k mera time jo waste hova uss ka kuch azala ho jae, kuch doston ne kaha bhi isay mat parhna, buss adat se majbor mukamal parh k chora, ab khud ko kos raha hon koi aur tamiri kaam ker leta iss time men, M A Rahat tu changa nai kita tenu Allah poche
bhai saab koi na koi esa kaam zror ghalt kia hy k Allah ne saza mein ye novel parhne dia, abhi bhi waqt hai sab toba ker lo
Posted 12:03:2011 - 04:00:08:
Allah app ko itni saza de jitna aap ne ye berabt kism ka novel likh ker hamara time waste kia
Galian dene ko jee chah raha hai, aur aap ki ghatiya tareen tasnif ne hamesha k leay aap ko meri nazar mein black list ker dia
Fazool Time wastage is novel ka sar hy na pair
aslamo alekum,
bahut c books study ke he mgr is book main jo bat hai kisi main ni
sb se importent writer ka zehn kitna saaf hai us ke soch zahir hoti hai is book main
Aslamo Alaikum
janab rahat sb. agar novel likhna naheen aata to kun itnee takleef kee ittna bakwaas hay yeh koi sir pair naheen hay kiss bhad khole rahay hain koi aik khani be puri nahee lamba itna kar dea keh akhar main us ko 10 pages main khatam kar dea sab bakwass hay